Place Name: First Place Contestant Name: Del Mar College Entry Title: Weekend devoted to table tennis Entry Credit: Paul Farias Judge Comment: Lots of voices here. That's always great. With a story like this, I'd try for a bit more scene-setting. Describe the sounds, etc. But good work.
Place Name: Second Place Contestant Name: Dallas College - Richland Entry Title: T-ducks win over Cedar valley Entry Credit: Tomy Arguelles Judge Comment: Good work. Just remember, with game stories, try to write backward -- stuff that happened later in the game comes first in the story, so second half, then first half.
Place Name: Third Place Contestant Name: Del Mar College Entry Title: Rays hit the ice Entry Credit: Paul Farias Judge Comment: Another solid entry from this writer.
